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22 Jan 2010 02:30
From the "About Senile Team" page:
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Senile Team strive to create quality retro games, with the solid gameplay we feel one can only find in the classic genres. We want our games to offer not only fun, but fun that lasts.

It should say, "Senile Team strives to create quality retro games".

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Pizza Rage
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22 Jan 2010 06:04
Plombo wrote:
It should say, "Senile Team strives to create quality retro games".

Maybe not. Sometimes (especially in Europe) a group is referenced in the plural form. Like, you might see "The Army say they are ready." (Also, it seems these days the word "data" is being used more and more in the plural form: "The data are being entered.")

Actually, I think it's kind of scary how perfect Senile Team's English is... um, are...

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22 Jan 2010 06:38 / last edited 22 Jan 2010 06:47
Pizza Rage is right, but if the singular form is easier on the ears for some I'd be happy to change the text.

And thank you for the compliment Pizza Rage, but I'm sure we have a long way to go before attaining perfection.


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Since the rest of the sentence continues with the plural "we", I changed it to "we at Senile Team..." Everybody satisfied?

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22 Jan 2010 23:30
Roel wrote:
Since the rest of the sentence continues with the plural "we", I changed it to "we at Senile Team..." Everybody satisfied?

Yup.

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